Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, April 15, 2020
The horse eating a banana with a baseball cap
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Kadie,
ReplyDeleteLovely writing today. When you are doing your writing complete it on a google doc and then you can just share that on your blog as well as it saving to your drive.
Well done on writing an amazing story Kadie. Maybe next time do more of a description on the horse or the humans. Overall I think it was a great story.
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