In the inky blackness of the shadows, she blended in perfectly. Her saucer-like eyes and sleek whiskers were all that could be seen.
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In the inky blackness of the shadows, she blended in perfectly. Her saucer-like eyes and sleek whiskers were all that could be seen.
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Ooh, good twist at the end! I LOVE your descriptive language, it really made the story come alive. Great work Kadie :)
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