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Friday, March 27, 2020

The Old Railroad Comes Alive


While we were in lock down because of "Corona virus" we had to do some school work at home I did this writing with a story starter from one of my teachers. I think the story stater made it easier to write. I took a picture of a really badly drawn train. Have you ever written with a story starter? Did it make your writing easier?

1 comment:

  1. Fantastic work Kadie. I like the way you used lots of good describing words. Have a look at the sick sentences activity as that is a great way to practice your editing skills.

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