Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 27, 2020
The Old Railroad Comes Alive
While we were in lock down because of "Corona virus" we had to do some school work at home I did this writing with a story starter from one of my teachers. I think the story stater made it easier to write. I took a picture of a really badly drawn train. Have you ever written with a story starter? Did it make your writing easier?
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Fantastic work Kadie. I like the way you used lots of good describing words. Have a look at the sick sentences activity as that is a great way to practice your editing skills.
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